electricland: (Audrey 2)
electricland ([personal profile] electricland) wrote2005-11-22 01:59 pm

doing my bit for charity

there's a bake sale on the 19th floor of my building. I'm always willing to eat baked goods for a cause.

[identity profile] raithen.livejournal.com 2005-11-22 07:12 pm (UTC)(link)
there is an unnecessary modifying phrase in your final sentence.

*snerk*

[identity profile] electricland.livejournal.com 2005-11-22 08:28 pm (UTC)(link)
you're quite right. on reflection I don't think it was necessary for the infinitive verb to be transitive...

[identity profile] raithen.livejournal.com 2005-11-22 09:00 pm (UTC)(link)
that, too.

*geeky* ;)