electricland (
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2005
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01:59 pm
doing my bit for charity
there's a bake sale on the 19th floor of my building. I'm always willing to eat baked goods for a cause.
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raithen.livejournal.com
2005-11-22 07:12 pm (UTC)
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there is an unnecessary modifying phrase in your final sentence.
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electricland.livejournal.com
2005-11-22 08:28 pm (UTC)
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you're quite right. on reflection I don't think it was necessary for the infinitive verb to be transitive...
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raithen.livejournal.com
2005-11-22 09:00 pm (UTC)
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that, too.
*geeky* ;)
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