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May. 30th, 2006 04:03 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
electriclandI have just compressed 94 34 [less impressive, sorry -- the page range was 94 to 128] pages of text into 1419 words. I could probably stand to shorten it a bit still. Nevertheless, go me. (Grade level according to Word: 9.0)
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Date: 2006-05-30 08:55 pm (UTC)and my reading level for the revised para was 12, so DOUBLE GO YOU! ;).
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Date: 2006-05-30 09:36 pm (UTC)I need to go over it again and hopefully cut the reading level down a bit further... although there's only so much I can do at a certain point. But a chunk of the audience probably has some reading comprehension issues, so we're trying to be as clear as possible. (Yay bullet points!)