electricland: (work mouse)
electricland ([personal profile] electricland) wrote2006-05-30 04:03 pm
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in other news

I have just compressed 94 34 [less impressive, sorry -- the page range was 94 to 128] pages of text into 1419 words. I could probably stand to shorten it a bit still. Nevertheless, go me. (Grade level according to Word: 9.0)

[identity profile] raithen.livejournal.com 2006-05-30 08:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Go You!
and my reading level for the revised para was 12, so DOUBLE GO YOU! ;).

[identity profile] electricland.livejournal.com 2006-05-30 09:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

I need to go over it again and hopefully cut the reading level down a bit further... although there's only so much I can do at a certain point. But a chunk of the audience probably has some reading comprehension issues, so we're trying to be as clear as possible. (Yay bullet points!)